26 June, 2011

With love

W for what?
PS: posted for ABC Wednesday


What is it about you that makes me revisit fairytale in bright daylight with wide open eyes,
What is it about you that makes me smile when you cross my thoughts.
What is it about you that makes me long for you the first thing in morning at times,
What is it  about you that makes me fly on cloud nine to receive your call at unexpected times,
What is it about you that i call you by different names,
What is it about you that i crossed the societal norms,
What is about you that makes me want to be at the receiving end,
What is it about you that makes me feel i own you though i lost you ages ago,

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15 comments:

  1. The Solitary WriterJune 26, 2011 at 4:20 AM

    so many questions to ask....

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  2. VinatiJune 26, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    Nice read!
    And specially the last line.. :)

    Hey thanks a lot for visiting my blog and following it too.. :) :)

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  3. Live2cherishJune 26, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    @solitary writer: One way to escape the turmoils in your core is to ask questions for which you don;t have answers ;)

    @Vinati: Glad to be your follower, keep up the good work. Learning is always mutual.

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  4. ZebaJune 26, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Dishita! You make me happy. I am kinda sure that you are the only one who actually reads me. :-)

    And the questions. I am always asking myself the same. More often that I did like to admit. But nice to see them all framed and posted. Puts a lot of things in perspective for me.

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  5. Live2cherishJune 26, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    Zeba: Your comment made me happy too. "I read you"- hahahaa. Well, atleast i can read someone if not myself, i will take that as an accomplishment for the day "winks".

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  6. JackJune 28, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    Dishita,

    Read three posts now. Enjoyed the comic and Plead 1 the most. So factual, isn't it? Not being IT person, it buzzed by me. This one shows depth of love but last line shook me up.

    Take care

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  7. Live2cherishJune 28, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Jack,
    Yep, it is more actual than factual ;). Life is about unexpected, a mere post should not shake you.

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  8. RJuly 1, 2011 at 1:55 AM

    Very well written bit :)

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  9. Live2cherishJuly 1, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Raam Pyari: :) thank you. Happy travelling.

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  10. RachitJuly 3, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    Love, love and love.. oolalala.. :)

    Weakest link:)

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  11. Live2cherishJuly 4, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    Rachit: :) i know.

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  12. dishantparikhJuly 11, 2011 at 12:17 AM

    Hi Dishita,

    Its wonderful. Really good one..!!!

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  13. Live2cherishJuly 11, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    @dishant: :)

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  14. SouravJuly 16, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    The last line said more than the whole post. Lovely :)

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  15. Live2cherishJuly 16, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    @Sourav: omg! the love boy likes it! Made my weekend. thank you.

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